Here are the next 8 sentences of my story, Bewitched. I hope you enjoy it. And don’t forget to check out my fellow Weekend Writing Warriors. A good read is only a click away.
“Did you bring it?” the raspy voice said from behind.
Carol turned to face the man and studied the slitty eyes peering from behind the ski mask. So the bastard came. His expression was detached, it wasn’t what she wanted to see. He won’t be fooled, not this time. But she needed what he had and would tell him anything to get it.
She glanced down at her sneakers again. God help her, the smudge was still there.
An Authors Ramblings 
Uh oh. The smudge?
This is excellent. I like the characterization. I think I’d be more afraid of him than she seems to be. Then again, he has something she needs…
Nicely done!
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Carol is a cool customer, for sure. That smudge hints at her undoing. Excellent 8, thank you for sharing.
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Hmmm, fascinating, such a great snippet, all the details, and leaves me wondering a LOT of things, so this is GOOD. 🙂
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Oooh. Smudge? Now I’m curious to what she needs help in! Great snippet.
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Howdy….
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