Bewitched by JK Candlen – Weekend Writing Warriors #15 April 26, 2015

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Bewitched by JK Candlen

Things have been hectic and I missed last Sunday, but I’m back. So as a treat, I’m giving you a double dose of snippets today. Last time Carol was confronted by her inner demons. They are a jovial group reminding Carol her life is not right. She tries to ignore them but they are always there in her peripheral.

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     Carol started to pace, she was tired of waiting. Where was he? A curse slipped over her lips and she was getting madder by the minute. She had better things to do and it was he that needed her. No, that wasn’t right. Carol needed something from him.

    Ring, ring, ring. The bright noise startled Carol, but she chuckled to herself when she realized it was her cell phone.

    Why was she so jumpy? It was probably just Frank. She knew he would be calling her eventually wondering where she was. An icy smile crept onto her face thinking about the lie she would tell him this time. He was so gullible and would believe anything.

     She pulled the phone out of her pocket and looked at it. Iris? Why would she be calling her at this time of night? She ignored the call.

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8 thoughts on “Bewitched by JK Candlen – Weekend Writing Warriors #15 April 26, 2015

  1. Hi JK. Good 8. She’s really calculating. Makes me wonder what has gone on to make her like that. I agree with Christina. She might regret not answering the phone. 🙂

    One thing jumped out at me. I might be wrong, but I think that an onomatopoeia (like your “Ring, ring, ring” above) is italicized.

    Now I have to put on my moderator’s hat. 🙂 In trying to be fair to everyone, we do ask participants to post 8 sentences. We do leave comments on posts that go well over 8. 🙂

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